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i scratch a dry quill into the
ocean, to carve
             love against my veins.



then i burst these walls.
©2007-2009 ~Viris
:iconviris:

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i was feeling something that day.

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:iconmadabi:
Dammit... you and your pen/quillness skills *is jealous*

I love it n____n

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"Chocolate is the answer"
:iconviris:
You're so sweet = ) Thanks

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"Ten years before, she would have been considered pretty; now, with lines around her mouth and the stain of persistent dissapointment in her eyes, she was almost beautiful."

from "The Dumb House" - John Burnside
:iconsmall--imperfections:
:deviation: I really do like this,
couldn't tell you any clever reason why though,
which is why I didn't comment on this before.
I couldn't exactly give you any feedback on it, except to say that it works,
and I love it.
I like the word 'scratch' heehee

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"If a kid asks where rain comes from, I think a cute thing to tell him is, "God is crying." And if he asks why God is crying, another cute thing to tell him is, "Probably because of something you did.""
:iconviris:
You're the bestest thing you are. Thanks for the fav.

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"Ten years before, she would have been considered pretty; now, with lines around her mouth and the stain of persistent dissapointment in her eyes, she was almost beautiful."

from "The Dumb House" - John Burnside
:iconshes-a-vamp:
i love the last line, it makes the poem.

and yeah. poetry is sick.

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i'd love to get inside your head, but i've misplaced my scalpel..
:iconviris:
Thanks so much - I hardly even think of this as a poem, so that's a nice thought.

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"Ten years before, she would have been considered pretty; now, with lines around her mouth and the stain of persistent dissapointment in her eyes, she was almost beautiful."

from "The Dumb House" - John Burnside

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